Luis Chaluisan's Poetry


Luis Chaluisan performs as El Extreme Chamaco. He has had 27 arrests, no convictions. Graduated from Amherst College in '86, and was in the National Slam Competions 1998 Houston and 1999 Chicago (Team Ct).
"I drink, I smoke, I gamble and hope that God want to hear a good story when I make my appearance at The Big Show." ~Luis Chaluisan.
Please e-m@il any comments or suggestions to him at
VFMAIV@aol.com.


NECESSARY EVIL

En El 503
Of 161st Street
Billie Zombie
comes out of
The side of his neck
Sells wolf tickets
With glimmers that peel
The insides of lesser cobras
Competing for strikes
In the bush
Of a jungle gone mad
En la America
Land of Constitution
  Restitution
And   Prost - perity
Cubicled thoughts
Neatly arrange themselves
In Billie's mind
Crime does not pay
At least not the way
Lesser children try
To pull it off
Billie Zombie
A dawn patrol jammer
From the giddy-up
For him
Suzie Sidewinder is heaven on earth
The pale fall moon moans
As Billie makes love to Suzie
Never with her
Never with her
But to her
Suzie's lust is to linger with him
Suzie's lust is to rapture in chaos
Leaving sane moments far away
As Billie Zombies vice fills her
The stars desert the sky
And rush to fill her eyes
While she lies
Pixilated
As Billie pumps her lips
Up and down
All around
And with a circular motion
Swallows her whole
She comes hard
Sits straight up

In heated
     Repeated
     Suck - seeded
Orgasms
Rushes of ecstasy
An airline ticket to
12 O'clock highs

Oh poppie
You can crawl across my bedsheets
On your eyebrows any time

Ai Mi Cremita Especial
You may be a bitch to others but
You're an angel in my eyes

Two blackbirds
Speaking little blue lies
Night to night
Along the lazy sidestreets
Of the jungle
In between the sexing
Billie rides the loop
Night to night
And with Suzie leaves pieces
Of themselves on the X-treme highway
While pulling stick-ups
Each one bolder
     Richer
     Brazen enough
To hit the restaurant in the building
They live in
Going back for a late supper
Acting shocked as the cantina owner
Spills his drinks and troubles
Then picks up their check
For his most valued and compassionate customers
Crime doesn't pay
At least not the way
Lesser children
Try to pull it off

Billie Zombie and Suzie Sidewinder
Serve their purpose
In this part of God's little acre
While others fall
They rise
Because Billie and Suzie
Are meant for the life
Because without them
Goodness would be a
Bland indistinguishable routine
They apologize for nothing
Because they rest safe in the conviction
Crime doesn't pay
At least not the way
Lesser children
Try to pull it off
En la America
Land of Constitution
  Restitution
And   Prost - perity

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CARMEN BABY

Don't Care to Go
Don't you know
I Just Want To Be
A Part Of Your Life
So Let Me In
And Show You What's Right
I Care For You
My Love

There are two things
That Carmen Baby knows
That God knows
1. That she is beautiful
And   2. the value she places on her life
And on those she loves
Johnny Boy precariously glides alongside her
At once tender and then violent
When his mind explores the frenzy
that fuels his moonlit passions
Carmen Baby and Johnny Boy
Binary stars dancing in the night sky
Drawn in then out
Held together by the magnetism
that is known as their daughter
Linda
The ark of the covenant wherein
Carmen Baby safeguards Johnny's soul
Three spiritual universes drawn together
By a special mystical plan
Which Johnny corrupts
With the panache
Of Al Jolson on steroids

I do
I really do
I love you

To which Carmen Baby responds

And I cry at night
In my heart
But no tears come from my eyes

Carmen Baby prays for her Johnny
and dreams
In that world Johnny is at peace with himself
And their Linda travels freely
Yet those dreams are tempered by his rudeness
     His impetuosity
And bent brilliance
But She Loves
Because it is right
And values her life
And those of the ones she loves
To ensure she can continue to fulfill the plan
No Angst
No harshness
Just a quiet dignity
With the right amount of indignation
To cause Johnny Boy to stop and wonder
Before he lurches into his next episode
As a reporter from the underworld

When you've been in love
You have been to the greatest school
So try and make it even
And I'll do the same
And let's live
Before it's too late
Let's live
I know I know I know I know
I love you

Surabye Johnny
Drop me a line
My Love

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Johnny Boy

Riding a low slung black Cadillac tonight
With a Voodoo priestess sitting at his side
Eyes full of pain he's got nothing that remains
He's riding all the way to New Orleans yeah
Sex and drugs and sin are his thing
Riding a low slung black Cadillac he dreams
Riding a low slung black Cadillac he dreams
Riding a low slung black Cadillac he dreams

Johnny Boy is back in town
A creeper in bruised lives
A trader in sultry secrets
He has no right to know
A metropolitan skyjacker
Taking hostage the stray Amelia Erhardts
He preys out of emptiness
A modern vampire of emotions
Johnny Boy has arrived
Brought by powers unseen
To change the course
A necessary evil
In a dirty little town
Of ruined directions
Skyscrapers amuse him
Pits invite the taste of his special
Manipulations
Have you seen him
El Loco Cantinero
Of hyperventilated thoughts
Have you seen him
He arrived naked at the party
Trying to check his clothes
And announcing to all
Sugar
I came to dance
He seduces the confused port
The isolated lover
The struggling woman
The ambitious teacher
Johnny Boy dismisses boundaries
And uses the tragedy of a comedian
To ejaculate his venom
He performs on stage free of charge
Sparks fly from his steel tipped shoes
Create icons
Of indignity
Of impulse
Have you met him
I have
He calls collect
From way inside

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THE GREAT GAME

Eyes tongue a red haze
Of silver spikes and black velvet fury

A catholic boy on a rampage through hell
A new age saint with a customized rosario
Who sweats benedictions as he rides her
On an elevator rooftop
With a pistol strapped to his back
Each thrust setting of a bullet
Up between her legs
Through her stomach
Past her heart
Coming out her lips
Into his
A wild shot of cold hearted lust
As soot falls on them
Like soft black petals
Raining on both the living
And the dead
A rogue duskie
Deca-dancing on the edge of razors
He stalks runners with his boy
Yo Yo Montalvo
And tries to find ways to avoid
Their own stalkers
Nightbombers in silk shirts
And four hundred dollar shoes
Searching for keys broken off
Long ago in forgotten locks
Searching for
The Great Game
And compromising every truth
Along the way
Forget about it replaces
Doing the right thing
And he fades as a standup guy
Searching for a way in
He's been speeding so long
Marking time
Paying cops
Burying partners
Tricking queens
Cruising shadows
Whacking even priests
In dreams
Reality cuts loose
Avenues slice into boulevards
D-D-D-D-Dodge City
He jumps into his third world club car
Reeking of Polo and reefer
An artillery strapped to every extremity
He's headed for a
Sell -a- bray-tion
Yo Yo is spinning
Dead eyes crazy glued on everything
A plastic mask for a face
Fifth in one hand
Eight ball in the other
A new kind of pool game
Without a clue
On guard
From what
Himself
He supposes
What up yo
Let's go visit the savages in Brooklyn
But they never get past the border
He goes for a hit
Takes a drink
Forgets to steer
And
Rams the divider
The savages aren't in Brooklyn
They're right here
They're in the car
They're us

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STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS: A PIECE FOR 4 POETS

(V1-V4) strong voices but unaffected
WE COME IN

(V1)
comedy

(V2)
adventure

(V3)
fantasy

(V4)
and tragedy

(V2-V3-V4)
(Twilight Zone Theme)

(V1) rod serling voice:

Jahma slam
The tonic for your cultural emptiness

(V2) homeboy voice:

Who we got to shoot to get a drink on up in here

(V3) trailer trash voice:

As God is my witness, I will never go thirsty again but I don't know nothin about birthing no babies and what about the children, tell me, what about the children

(V4) super announcer voice:
LOCKUP YOUR SONS, DAUGHTERS AND CUTE GREAT AUNTIES CAUSE THE YOUNG NEGRO BUCK -- ALSO KNOWN AS CLARENCE -- IS RIDING INTO TOWN WITH PEPE RICAN , CREOLE HATTIE, AND SKIMBO THE TALKING GOAT. WHOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEE ITS GONNA BE A SUDSUCKINBUTFUCKIN BOOTHEADLICKING CHILIDOGSNIFFIN SCALAWAGINPROFANITORIUM OF F.U.N..

(V1-V2-V4)
Bring your momma bring your pop bring your dog down from arkansas, all right - hey, hey

(V3) hysterical
And what about the children, tell me, what about the children

(V4)
THAT'S RIGHT
CLARENCE, PEPE, HATTIE AND SKIMBO THE TALKING GOAT
TONIGHT
REALLY

(V1-V4)
YOU WILL BELIEVE A GOAT WILL FLY
AND IF NOT YOU SHOULD.

(V3) affected refined voice but still trailer trash:

You know, this reminds me of the time I was Prime Minister in Uganda. Shortly before Idi ... yes ... I remember as if it were yesterday. You know he was a bit of a brute. We had our faults mind you but Idi was just plain rude. A shame really. But enough of that.

(V1/V2/V4)
DON'T FORGET!!!!!!

(V3)
It takes a village to raise a child
It takes an imposed ghetto to destroy a dream

(V4)
LET THERE BE NO DOUBT IN YOUR MINDS. CAUSE WE GOING TO GET CHEESY I'M TALKING LIKE GEORGE AN WEEZIE MAYBE THROW IN SOME GRUMPY AND SNEEZY CAP IT OF LIKE JAMES WITH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEY R&B MELODY RANTING THE WORLD OVER WHILE RUDY TRIES TO BEND HILARY OVER AS ABNER SITS CLUTCHING A FOUR LEAF CLOVER LOOKIN ON LIKE SOME LOST ROVER

(V1)
Enraged

(V2)
Embittered

(V3)
Embalmed

(V4)
CLARENCE, PEPE, HATTIE AND SKIMBO THE TALKING GOAT.
TONIGHT
REALLY

(V1-V4)
MIX -MATCH-CALL AND RESPOND: MESMERIZE THE AUDIENCE/CASCADE OF
REPETITVE VOICES PICKING UP THE PACE AS THE INTERWEAVING DEVELOPS

YOU WILL BELIEVE A GOAT WILL FLY. AND IF NOT YOU SHOULD.
YOU WILL BELIEVE A GOAT WILL FLY. AND IF NOT YOU SHOULD.
YOU WILL BELIEVE A GOAT WILL FLY. AND IF NOT YOU SHOULD.
YOU WILL BELIEVE A GOAT WILL FLY. AND IF NOT YOU SHOULD.
YOU WILL BELIEVE A GOAT WILL FLY. AND IF NOT YOU SHOULD.
YOU WILL BELIEVE A GOAT WILL FLY. AND IF NOT YOU SHOULD.
YOU WILL BELIEVE A GOAT WILL FLY. AND IF NOT YOU SHOULD.

(V2) An extreme quickness for the rest of piece till noted

CREOLE HATTIE WILL WORK A ROOT ON YOU

(V3)
OOOOOO SCARY SCARY TIME

(V1-V4)
ROOT ROOT ROOT ROOT

(V3) trailer trash voice fading away from mike:

AS GOD I MY WITNESS, I WILL NEVER GO THIRSTY AGAIN

(V1)
ITS SCARY TIME CHILDREN

(V4)
A GOAT I SAY A GOAT

(V2) raspy old man drnk
POUR ME DRINK

(V3) solemnly
AND NOW THE TRUE STORY OF THE YOUNG NEGRO BUCK

(V1) dramatic
ALSO KNOWN AS CLARENCE

(V4) b boy rap
WHO RODE INTO THE WEST LOOKIN TO BUST A BRONCO
TOP OF THE HEAP HONCHO
TRIPPIN TOE TAPPIN THAT MAN IS BUTT NAKED MACHO
LISTENS TO ABBA BACKWARDS
HEARING THE SAME RAPTURE
THAT ROCKS HIS SOUL EVERAFTER
A STUPID RICAN HE'S ALWAYS SEEKING
THE BITTER EDGES OF ENDLESS DREAMIN
SCHEMINGANGSTALEANINOFFTHEHOOK
PAPICHULOALWAYSBEEMINUPTOSCOTTY
ASMOKEADRINKAPIPEDHOTTOTTIE

(V1)
ENRAPTURED

(V2)
ENCHANTED

(V3)
EMBALMED

(V2) timid
MOTHER IS THAT YOU

(V3) same
MOMMA IS DAT U

(V1) same
MOMMIE ESA ERES TU

(V4) psychotic
A FLYING GOAT ....
HELP ME I'M BEING HELD HOSTAGE
BY A VELVET PICTURE OF ELVIS
A RED VELVET ELVIS
BUT NOT THE YOUNG ONE
ITS THE OLD FAT WASTED ONE

(V1)
ENRAGED

(V2)
EMBITTERED

(V3)
EMBALMED

(V1-V4) break the pace to original tempo
HELP ME
HEP ME
HEP
H

(V1) leave one a a time
THE END

(V2)
FIN

(V3)
NO MAS

(V4)
HASTA LA BYE BYE
ITS BEEN REAL
REALLY

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THE WORD

When you hit that spot
Where everything flows
Character to type
There is a moment of virtue
The words outgrow confined meaning
Become transcendent of confined meaning
Landing in supreme company
And then pass still higher

Image to archetype
Awakening a ravenous love bite
In the center of my mind
Where I have been so blind
Paying attenion to time
Than timing my affection
For the betterment
And perfection
Of an existence
Infected
But a day to day hectic

SCHEDULE
OF
EVENTS

I stand corrected
And accept the injection
Await the objective
Ablaze in selective
Emotional digestion
Of extra dimensional
Love

Drained from the terms
of all my adventures
All is order once more
Moving towards SupremeWisdom
Liberating a life that rewards

Stillness

Passing from solitary to solitary
Until captured in the hyperspace of my mind

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